Hey there Hamish, my name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. I think that the title for this post is awesome. 'Is it fake', I wanted to check this post out because I wanted to know what might have been fake.
Now although you have an amazing title and a cool photo, it would be nice if you had explained a bit about this unearthly lemon. That would really boost this post. Also I would have to agree with Coralee, I know the lemon is real, but I think that it must have been coloured with dye, or something.
Hi Hamish, I don't know if it's real or not. It can be real because someone could have dyed the inside of the lemon. Then again it could just easily be photoshop. Is it fake or is it not?
Your title and image are eye catching but there's no context anywhere. You should explain why your sharing it, what this is about and what to take from the blog. Also, putting it in a digital learning object for example, slides along with the first tip would be a extream improvment.
At first glance, did you think it was real? Hope to see you again.
it's real but the color is fake.
ReplyDeleteHey there Hamish,
ReplyDeletemy name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. I think that the title for this post is awesome. 'Is it fake', I wanted to check this post out because I wanted to know what might have been fake.
Now although you have an amazing title and a cool photo, it would be nice if you had explained a bit about this unearthly lemon. That would really boost this post. Also I would have to agree with Coralee, I know the lemon is real, but I think that it must have been coloured with dye, or something.
I hope to hear more,
Jedi😃
Hi Hamish, I don't know if it's real or not. It can be real because someone could have dyed the inside of the lemon. Then again it could just easily be photoshop. Is it fake or is it not?
ReplyDeleteYour title and image are eye catching but there's no context anywhere. You should explain why your sharing it, what this is about and what to take from the blog. Also, putting it in a digital learning object for example, slides along with the first tip would be a extream improvment.
At first glance, did you think it was real? Hope to see you again.
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