Hi guys And girls to day I will be sharing a amazing and inspireing story of Palatas Havea
and his trip from a small island in tonga to a masters degree
Hello Hamish, It is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a picture. In our class we have a peice of paper that says everything that we need to put into a blog. I think that you are missing a few things of there. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more. You could also try to Add a more catchy title. But other than that Ka Pai Bridget
Hello Hamish,
ReplyDeleteIt is Bridget here from Yaldhurst Model School/Rimu Class. This blog post stood out to me because you gave a discription and you also added a picture. In our class we have a peice of paper that says everything that we need to put into a blog. I think that you are missing a few things of there. To start off with you could probaly try exsplaing a bit more.
You could also try to Add a more catchy title.
But other than that
Ka Pai
Bridget