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Thursday 6 June 2019

A Far Story

Hi my name is Hamish and I will be telling you a narrative about a kingdom of blood and
war. So sit back and read the story please make sure to tell me what I did right and what I did wrong down in the comments!

Once upon a time long long ago in a realm far away there was a
Man and he was a very tall man with teeth like a saber tooth tiger and claws as sharp as knives with blood running down his face He clawed into a tree angrily cutting it down in 2 hits He felt like exploding into a fit of rage after finding out that his father was a murder then he heard a noise and in 1 8th of a second it was dead from a menacing stare, he then knew what he was he was THE FIRST VAMPIRE, which means he is immortal.

500,000 YEARS LATER

He awoke form his slumber and helt quite hungry assuming that the woods that he lived in was not chopped down but as soon as he opened the curtains he was struck with sunlight burning him he quickly darted back into the shadows and waited for night fall.
When night fall finally came he ran outside as fast as a jet and quickly found his first victim in a town that looked familiar he began to think back to when he was last awake and he remembered this was the town that he grew up in and its name was Hamish the town of many dead.

He ran to a taxi driver who freaked out as soon as he was seen and started screaming at the top of his lungs for help but no one came quinn the vampire said where is the best place to feed and the taxi driver pointed to las vegas... the vampire look up and was amazed at what the world had accomplished in 500,000 years "wow your race aren't just smelly flesh bags living in caves anymore you are kinda smart" then he looked at the taxi driver again and said you will taste nice, He jumped in the window and started to bite into the neck with blood exploding all over him and him ripping the taxi man up to nothing bud a skin bag.
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But as soon as he left the car a vampire killer was hiding around the corner of the street block and flashed a sun beam at quinn killing him instantly.



1 comment:

  1. I love the language features you've used Hamish - you painted a picture in my head with your descriptive language. I especially like the similes and your choice of words. "He awoke from his slumber..." and "..quickly darted back into the shadows and waited for nightfall" Really powerful combinations of words in those sentences, well done.

    Awesome ako! I look forward to reading more.

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